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Old April 11th, 2004, 08:14 PM
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I just want to start by thianking everyone who contributed to my humble education of the SEO ways. I have launched my first site and I need some opinions and help. I am currently targeting the keywords: Tiffany Lamps. I've just signed up for a paid inclusion for inktomi and I am holding my breath for a google crawl. Please take a look at site and tell me what you think. If there is anything I need to add or take away to improve my rankings, I am all ears!

www.tiffany-lamp.com is my homepage.

As always, I thank you for kind generosity and assistance on my quest for top rankings!!

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Old April 11th, 2004, 08:16 PM
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i have a hard time making the relationship between your header graphic and your product.
it also is very vague and abstract.
...particularly the way the person on the far left is cut off....like the person is hiding.
you need something up there that captures "vintage" and "crafted" and "artistic" like your product.
the gold color is nice but is almost a little overpowering for the delicate lamp colors.

2.
index page title....
you need to make more use out of your page title.
yes...i am sure "80% off" looks good in the search engine results.
but if its sitting at no. 125...so what...
same goes for "free shipping"....good sales pitch but not going to get search results.
get more keywords in that page title.

3.
other page titles...
make the internal page titles more specific to the page topic.
like "tiffany style table lamps".

4.
always refer to your home page as:
http://www.tiffany-lamp.com/
never as:
http://www.tiffany-lamp.com/index.html
do this always.

5.
if you send someone to another site...like ebay...from your site....
always open the url in a new window.

6.
change all page file names like:
tiffanyceilinglamps.html
to this:
tiffany-ceiling-lamps.html

7.
get more sites pointing to your site.
you need more pagerank.

8.
product image file names would benefit by having more human friendly names.
for example:
T12011.jpg
should be:
tiffany-dragonfly-series-T12011.jpg

9.
your meta keywords...for what they are worth...
"Tiffany Lamp, Tiffany Table Lamp, Tiffany Floor Lamp, Tiffany Ceiling Lamp, Tiffany Style Lamp"
.....could be a little more detailed and specific.

10.
a nice site overal.
nice products.
the competition is not too bad for 'tiffany lamps'...but i dont see you in the top 100 yet.
good luck.




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Old April 12th, 2004, 09:13 PM
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What can I say....

Much obliged for your kind review. I have taken note of all your comments and plan to implement the changes immediatly. Its the generousity of people like yourself that make this forum the worlds' best classroom. With thanks once again. Any idea how long my pr will remain 0 like this?

tiffany-lamp.com Team.

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Old April 13th, 2004, 06:35 PM
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no problema.
[i finally get to use the 'terminator' smilie.]





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