See if I managed to do any of what forum advises

Could you please look at my site and see if I have done anything right? Is it better?
My key word density are
candle 4.52% making 3.62% candles 3.24% supply 2.49%
wax 1.88% scents 1.51supplies 1.43% scent 1.28%
wholesale 1.21% instructions 1.21%
I beleive you guys said 5 to 6% and I am not there yet, but how do you do this with out looking like spam? Is my site spammy?
My phrase density is candle making 6.63% and candle making supply is 5.88%
I have 45 Outgoing Links Internal Links 45 - is this to many?
I added more text, put keywords in links and added links to the bottom of the page, were they wrong.
I think I need to work on the sites link structure, am I right about that?
I added a site map

whats the url waxbrat? (i remember seeing your site, but dont remember the url)

LOL, see I didn't even do that right, it's www.wicks-wax-scents.com .......and I knew to do that! Must be getting older.

i think you are doing fine with your keywords. i wouldn't worry too much about percentages. there are some design issues i would consider however that might help both your users and your rankings. first of all the home page is a little jumbled and hard to follow. i was confused as to why you have the links to other sites in-between two sections of text about your site. i would personally put the links to the other sites on a completely different page. i like the links at the bottom of the page, and i would suggest that perhaps using that same look at the top of the page might improve the user experience. i guess basically the navigation links on the top left are confusing, especially with the different font sizes. the site map is good, and that might also be an inspiration for new navigation. maybe have the site map headings as your navigation, and then as they go to each page, there are sub-navigation links on those pages. this would also give you more pages in the site, which could help your ranking. and a final note: if i were to use the sitemap headings as navigational links, i would make sure that they used my keywords as well. hope some of this helps!

thank you very muck, I'll go back to work with what you said. Really can't thank you enough.

Tested in Mozilla 800x600 56k. Loads nice and fast but it is rather difficult to read and the navigation is unclear (and it looks the same in both Mozilla and IE). I think it needs rearranging and the size of text and seperating into paragraphs would help. If you've got any pictures of candles (not too many) then that will add to what you are trying to sell. Good luck with it.

Nick

thanks for the tips. I have been working on the site everyday.

There nickc, is that better? Is the text size to big?