Please Review !! ... This is my Children's Site...

hello....

i had a visitor come to my site and they suggested visiting this forum.
I have a web site that i would really like to get out and i am kinda a newbie when it comes to that..
i have a story to tell and it's not through yet.
the law in my county is really bad at inforcing law and just basicly doing the right thing involving children.
i am on my way to work at the moment but want very much to post before i left.

http://home.triad.rr.com/familyissues/ is my page

please, if anyone can help me in getting this out to where people will read it by just letting me know how to do that with ranking and subbmitting and stuff, i would greatly appreciate it.
I am only wanting everyone to read and just see what's going on in my area.
IT'S wrong and they know it
im losing my kids little by little with the law around here and i want everyone to read whats going on..

I do appreciate any help....
i wont be posting for a few days cause im taking my kids to myrtle beach this weekend and wont be back till wensday ...

thank-you for any help you can offer....

Chris B. White

for starters you can format your pages to look nicer.

design a site that flows

page 1 does not sound as interecting as anything more descriptive would

also choose the terms you want to list well for and then do so. it is rather easy as all the tips needed surround you!

The links in your left nav box don't work.

Take this the right way, but people are pretty selfish and self-centered. I don't think your site will be popular unless your story creates some sort of precedent in custody outcomes.

I didn't read most of it (people are selfish) but I hope there is a happy ending somewhere.