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    Please review my website www.primeclean.com.au


    Hi all,

    Basically we are a family operated carpet cleaning service the website is:

    www.primeclean.com.au

    I been doing some link building myself and helping the family with some online advertising.

    I am not sure what i am doing wrong but the website seems to fall down for specific keywords such as:-

    carpet cleaning Sydney, mattress cleaning.

    Thanks in advance to any advice or input .

    Sami
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    How are you building these links?

    and after a quick look at your site, your on-page SEO isn't there, titles are stuffed and some are way too long, save that for your description, there's no need to use the same word 3 and 4 times in the title or repeating it on the title of another sub page. Your content, why is half in bold? Make all of that read well for the user not the search engines.
    You've got a lot of work to do before gathering links.

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    Originally Posted by Test-ok
    How are you building these links?

    and after a quick look at your site, your on-page SEO isn't there, titles are stuffed and some are way too long, save that for your description, there's no need to use the same word 3 and 4 times in the title or repeating it on the title of another sub page. Your content, why is half in bold? Make all of that read well for the user not the search engines.
    You've got a lot of work to do before gathering links.
    Test-ok thank you for taking the time and having a look at the website, the on-site optimization was done around 3-4 years ago by a paid seo person, little or none has be done on-site since then..do you advice me that i start reading the on site optimization section on the forum? and is there any tools that you recommends for that purpose?

    Thank you

    Sami

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    Hello Sami,
    There is loads of good help here, there are some really good websites that provide a whole raft of help on on-page optimisation basics.
    If you are a reader, a couple of books you might think of reading: Search Engine Optimisation for Dummies by Peter Kent - 4th edition - (I think), and Search Engine Optimization: An Hour a Day - 3rd edition or later.
    Good Luck
    Neil

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