June 28th, 2003, 09:52 AM
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Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada
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Re: Please review my site
Quote: Originally posted by mumbui
This is my first site. please review and give me ideas on areas to improve.
http://mumbui.com |
You may want to view some of the new posts in search engine strategies forums - they are highly relevant here.
The only thing I will add - "stuff" on your website link hierarchy does not sound too professional. If this was a hobby site, or a kids site I wouldn't see a problem with this language.
Think about who your target market is - if these are businesses you really need sound "professional", if for home computer users, less formal language is ok, but "stuff" does not really convince me that you are a trustworthy business I would give money too - I might just get "stuff" back rather than a personal computer.
Constrctive criticism only.
Also "Contact Me" as an email anchor is ok for a person website but inappropriate for any business website.
No phone, fax, or even a location of operation means no business.
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