Ok i'm jumping in... Lets see what this brings!

Hi,
Usually i'm quite reluctant about asking for other peoples opinion about what i do, I'm more of a lowner and i work and learn alone, mostly silently by reading other peoples ideas about things and by doing my oen thing. But this time i think i'll jump in and see what it brings.

I have this web site where i've done everything designing, programming, seo-ing, and every other "ings" that is possible. It's been up for 2 years and lying around with no real traffic until i started rethinking the hole design, applying some seo tricks.

Things were really improving until the last dance where many of us started to have problems.

So my new optimized website is up since the month of march and i've only stopped working on it 2 weeks ago.

The URL is: www.hotelus.com

So like i said i'm willing to take it all, so have a go at it !
Ultimately I realize that we are all here to help eachother !

Ok than, no one has something to say about my website.

Maybe a forgot to mention that my targeted keywords in order of importance are.
Hotels
Discount hotels

And the most important question i had is, am i using good uptomization technics for my main keywords ?

Thanks

Hello, maybe change your title tag to read more for your key words and phrases.
<title>Hotels, Lodgings, Hotel Discount Reservations and Travel</title>
to
<title> Hotels, Discount hotels reservations and travel</title>
This puts your main keywords and phrase first.
Might help.
Also your description looks more like a list of keywords and phrases than a description, consider revising it maybe.