http://www.gf-lifestyles.com - Adult-ish (and Newbie!) warning...

Hey guys & girls..

It's my first post here... so hello everyone!!

My site is..

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I'd really appreciate any comments on it. As the title suggests it is of an adult nature, and i am a total newbie... so please be gentle with me ;)

I haven't really optimised it, other than my own futile attempts to make it SEO friendly... but as you can see, it's a bit of a mess

I have had the site up for around 3 weeks, and have had little dribbles of traffic from the SE's.. (mainly from froogle!!.. dunno why (yet :p..)

Obviously this is a really competitive market.. but hopefully I haven't bit-off more than I can chew here... Any comments would be really welcome..

I know it doesn't look good... someone with 1 post asking already for a review.. but in mitigation.. i only just found this place, and intend to (try) and be a part of this excellent resource.

Well enough talk... (if you've read this far lol) ...

Best wishes...
Brian

Seems like the same old crap. But hey good luck.

wow... what a helpful reply... thanks so much!!!

I'll implement all the great suggestions you have made immediately...

I guess that is one way to increase your post count..

If you have any other wonderful tips like this... please feel free to keep them to yourself

Aside from incredibly bad taste, it a pretty good site. Looks to me like its less than 2 monts old. It needs time to ripen with the search engines

1. In Mozilla the width is huge, there is a scroll bar on the bottom.
2. Your keywords are optimized around the PRODUCT name, I would recommend that your keywords be optimized around what the product does.
People will not likely search for "Spemanex" they will search for something like "increase cumm shot" or something like that. Try to incorperate the search phrases.
3. You should optimize the testomonials more towards boasting keywords.
4. Get more backlinks.

Finally, do people actually buy this ****? Do you expect sales?

Mike

hmm, Starbug, you need 2 learn how 2 sale. You dont sell a product by its name, you sell it by its benefits and features.
Like ask people if they know what Spemanex is? no1 will buy, (by the name), but if you put what it does...dey may do

So read point 2 ;)

You have already started getting back links by posting here.

This site just means more SPAM sites, lol


Dan