http://www.freedomfly.net/

Over the last few months, I've finalized my first edition of "The Beginner's Gudie to Fitness and Bodybuilding." I had a sales page up, but for the traffic I was getting, it wasn't doing so well.

I've not gotten a lot of returns (1 to date) and the feedback I have received is positive.

So I believe there is a market for this eBook. And I believe I have a good product. But without a good sales page, I have nothing.

Please review the following:

http://www.freedomfly.net/beginnerguide_sales.html

Pretty much everything about it. I know this is more of a tech crowd. But I'm looking for opinions, no matter what they might be, in order to change this to make it more compelling.

Assistance is appreciated,

Marc David

Firstly, to make you code a lot easier to read, you need to try and have your javascripts and style sheets external to the page (imported). This would probably help with SEs too.

I've thought of that as well. I've been doing exactly that for other things, I just have not consolidated it yet into js files for each action.

Great suggestion. At least I know my thinking was on the right track for better SEO. Thank you.

I hit back when i scrolled to view content below the page crease, when i saw the box, it seems to be the typical look, of some con site, a different design would be a better idea, the top design is great - the graphcis etc., i dont want to sound negative, but thats how customers would see the site as and means less sales.

Does anyone think the same?

Dan

Maybe I shouln't include the cartoon type graphics?