http://www.discreetfilms.com

looking forward to hearing any general constructive critisism.

http://www.discreetfilms.com adult dvd sales

thanks to all

looks fine from a seo point of view.
The layout and design is very boring with its black background and standard text.

Adult sites these days generally have very very nice graphics etc... so you need to spruce it up a bit.

forgive me im a graphic artist so visual impression is very important for me.

what happens if i wanted to buy online? there is also no facility to do it.

Also, I assume your site is sponsored by one of the big photo camera brands. Did you use that to "white out" a piece of the collage? Overview is good. Deregular is right about the graphics, but don't overdo it. It might distract, overwhelm and put off potential buyers. It's difficult to explain, but it should appear inviting and captivating but not flashy.

Also I noticed you don't use ALT attributes for your images. Might give your keywords just the extra push. Internal linking isn't as important as external, but still...