http://www.bettersleeppillow.com/

http://www.bettersleeppillow.com/

Im working on this site that sells memory-foam pillows. We are still tweaking the site's contents, but we believe the structure is going pretty well.

Some of the page titles are just cookie-cutter for now, and some of the keywords / descriptions are cut off (the db is being tweaked).

Id appreciate any thoughts, how can I help make it better? This whole site is dynamic, and built using an in-house Content-Management-System that we will use on other sites once we get it all tweaked out.

Designwise it's pretty good and sells the product. It kindof jumps out with the sheep, woman slepping etc. I like it.

The women were fun photographing We did it all inhouse, so it was pretty cool.

I love the sheep.

I think you should have some sort of transition effect in the flash header. Maybe have the images morph or fade into each other.

celcon - we just put in a simple flash piece for placement, we are looking doing a simple crossfade.

Pleasant looking site! I do agree that the image of the woman could be a little softer when changing? Fade in? Fade out? Just a little distracting to me the way it is. I think I would also like to see that first list of features shortened or made a little bit catchier to the eye. Add some Blue there highlighting the key features? Or maybe list a few Features then add the word PLUS (in blue) with more features following it? It kind of loses my interest about half way done (shhh..there are some typos there too)


Overall...very nice looking site. Great job

nice looking site, simple, attractive, and professional

You mentioned you are still tweaking...might want to check the order page - it asks me to select shipping method which I did then clicked on "Proceed to secure order" which then just opens another window and puts me back at "Select Shipping Method"

Browser used: Firefox 0.9

Thanks for catching the spelling mistakes.

The order page dosnt work on purpose, I dont want people trying to buy a prodect that we arnt ready to sell

I wish i could take credit for designing the site, but i cant, ive just been helping design the subsystem and keeping it all seo friendly.