First Time Sales Page

Prior to spending time marketing and testing
www.jobinterview-tips.com I would appreciate some
positive criticism on the sales page. This is my first
attempt so I know I'm letting myself in for much
criticism, but I really do want your input.

Thanks in advance for your time!

Big L.

I know that these sales pages are supposed to be profitable, but every time I see a page that has that "look", I don't even read it - I just move on to something else. When I see that format, I automatically think - oh, another BS sales pitch. Maybe the format works with newbies, or maybe its just me - but I don't like 'em.

I agree, i did the same , i saw the image and i didnt bother reading anymore...

Perhaps, you should be the first to have an independant design?

Dan

p.s. welcome to the forums Big L

Surprise! same here!
Sorry... I really freaked out when i saw that look again! I once got ripped off in one of those sites when i was very new.

But, don't get desperate Big L. Probably the nature of your visitors is much different than the typical people here. And i think your book can actually be good. The sales letter is good too (just too many bullets near the middle of the page!)

Thanks for the input forum members. I changed the graphics and made some changes in the middle. I've had the site up less than two weeks and already have had over 700 "hits" not counting today, and a few sales, with only three key word phrases. This improved as of yesterday when I changed the graphics (thanks to you) and I got 240 hits today ($12 add with Alexa plus freefind), and better sales, and wouldn't you know it, Google spidered me yesterday.

How long does it normally take to get indexed by Google after being spidered?

Thanks a million!!