Expert's valuable advice

Dear Friends shed some light on what kind of improvement i need to do for
www.bombaylimited.com.

The site also has a autogenerated HTML catalog at
www.BombayLimited.com/catalog

Any suggestion is appriciated

The site sells - Indian magazines, wetgrinders, indian sweets, aurvedic products, gift to india

the relaxzoolander ten ---

1.
you get no extra points for being from dayton ohio....sorry.

2.
isnt bombay referred to now as "mumbai"?
i dont have a complete handle on this cultural item...but i have seen it pop up.
how do you think it may affect your site?...since your domain is 'bombay'.

3.
there is lack of text information on the main page.
you need more for the bots to grab onto there.

4.
the big white space on scrolling is unsightly.
either add more middle section content or shorten the super long left column.

5.
your site slow for me.
it is slow enough to bother me.

6.
the 'featured stores' links do not work.

7.
your titles for the internal page are decent.
they could be a little longer however.
on the other hand...your index page title is way too long.

8.
you definitely need more pagerank on all of your site pages.
get more sites to point to your site.

9.
i am not sure what 'quality - safety - priority' means.

10.
your site seems nice.
you definitely need to promote it more on the internet.
establish relationships with other india sites and share lin/king with them.




good luck!

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hi i am from dayton ohio - relaxzoolander

guys Help me?