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Old April 14th, 2004, 07:11 PM
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Could i have my content pages reviewed?

http://www.cheatgenius.co.uk/cheats...abbo_Hotel.html

I am trying to focus on 'GAME NAME cheats' as my keyword for google. This page is Habbo Hotel Cheats.
Is the SEO here any good or not. I really need your thoughts.

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William Vicary

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Old April 15th, 2004, 02:11 PM
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any one?

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Old April 15th, 2004, 05:24 PM
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The Javascript is not helping you..... Try researching the Keywords you are going after. Know that they are up for much competition.

Also, your content needs to be rewritten, spellchecked- and have keywords included.

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Old April 15th, 2004, 05:58 PM
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The Javascript is not helping you..... Try researching the Keywords you are going after. Know that they are up for much competition.


Oh my, that is seriously well spotted Tmprod. 10/10. All Google can see is LHS menus around the whole site. Nothing else appears in a text browser.

You are going to have to show your content to Google. If you need to do includes then do them server side with PHP.


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Old April 15th, 2004, 06:44 PM
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huh, could you point me towards a text browser?

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Oops - having had a closer look it's bad markup that's causing me to see no content in Lynx or dreamweaver.

Lynx comes up with "bad html" and fails to load the content. Download lynx text browser from http://www.vordweb.co.uk/standards/download_lynx.asp

On the plus side, I searched for a combination of words in the content and google found your page - so Google is clearly able to see your content.

There are a few coding points you might want to consider:
1/You have 2 titles, one inside the head and one outside.
2/There is client side javascript above the head (should be inside head)
3/ You have 7 body tags (normally 1 is enough).

For search engines,
The coding is huge (1100 lines) and the content is at the bottom. You can have it at the top of the code by adding an extra row at the top of the main, then merging it with your content column.

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Old April 16th, 2004, 08:26 AM
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thanks i didnt realise about 7 body tags!!! 2 titles cannot be helped. Its the way the programming is layed out. And 1100 lines lemme look into that.

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I don't feel I've been all that helpful.

If you sort out the coding so it can be viewed in Lynx text browser or Dreamweaver then please post again for another review - I tend to use them to look at
structure and tags so might be able to be more helpful next time.

Page rank looks awful good though - if the links are from related sites then you have a lot of potential with your site.

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Quote:
Originally Posted by cheatgenius
http://www.cheatgenius.co.uk/cheats...abbo_Hotel.html

I am trying to focus on 'GAME NAME cheats' as my keyword for google. This page is Habbo Hotel Cheats.
Is the SEO here any good or not. I really need your thoughts.

Thanks
William Vicary

that page is not loading for me. :-|

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Old April 17th, 2004, 09:23 PM
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weird it should load instantly, maybe you caught it when we had to go down for maintenance?

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i went back again.
loading...loading...loading.

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