January 23rd, 2005, 02:50 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Carbondale, Colorado
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Hi, there a number of good things about the page from valid markup to the url's to the blog along with the other resources.
I am finding it difficult however to figure out what you offer. Is it merely informative or do you install or design the systems also. The site lacks focus in this area. Once you are deeper into the site there seems to be more content to sink your teeth into.
For instance the stuff on the left really has no immediate bearing per-say unless its you who is offering the workshops and seminars.
"You are simply radiant" could be made to be quite the trademark or addition to one but, it does not really lend for much of an explanation of your services. The first few paragraphs, including the phrase simply radiant needs to be much more targetted as to what you offer.
a few other logistical things would be to move the javascript and css into their own files and use includes rather than pasting it in the actual html.
and some of those meta tags don't do much. You have a blog for instance which will cause google and msn at least to index your site much more often than every 30 days which is what you want. Hence there is no need to the revisit tag and it likely is not going to do anything anyway.
Having link text that is different but going to the same place is an accessibility no no... I would remove either read more or register from all links on the left as they are going the same place and make sure actual content on left has targetted keyphrased information.
don't make forum open in new window and I suppose whether or not you need a gateway page there is debatable.
hope that helps...
Nigel Lew
Last edited by Nigel Lew : January 23rd, 2005 at 02:52 PM.
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