A newbee asks for a site critique

Dear SEO Experts,


I am a newbee, which means - I do not know much about Search Engine Optimization.
But, I know - you do. I have a web site which sells an e-book. While some of you might get offended by the mature content of my sales letter, others might love it. However, please don't point your finger to the door and tell me to go away with my eBook.

I would really appreciate if you could give me some tips or ideas on how I can improve the site in order to get more traffic.

Once again - the site contains mature content and explicit language not suitable for younger audience. Reader's discretion is advised.

http://www.YouAreOnFire.com


Thank you in advance!

Hi,

Your page is a complete mess in Firefox. There are huge gaps between the paragraphs making the page really long. There is also a load of yellow spammy text on top of the testimonial bit at the bottom. It's fine in Explorer though.

I would remove the yellow text and concentrate on getting backlinks with your keywords as the anchor text. I can't remember but I think there was a thread here a while back about optimising adult sites. You should do a quick search, see if you can find it.

Dear Celcon,

Thanks for your advice. I'm going to start working on that.
One last favour - could you please translate the above phrase into everyday English ?

Thanks again for your critique.

You need to pick out your major keywords and use them as the link text. So when adding your link to other sites, instead of just using your title, get in your best keywords.

THANKS A LOT ! I'm gonna work on that

its a mess in mozilla too, huge gaps between the quotes. it would be easier to navigate if it had a navigation bar or something