Please rate my SEO tutorial.

I finally finished my SEO tutorial, please rate it im looking for feedback. Thanks.
thegermz.com/category/tutorials/seo

Some good helpful tips. Definatley worth a read. Well done.

:O thank you very much! It took me a long time since I have a ton of school homework and had a lot of projects due this week.

Now that feedburner count is really quite impressive... better than anything I have ever done... man it is even better than Jeremy Shoemaker, Aaron Wall & Rand Fishkin... I think the highest they have is something like 15K but your already 28K? Now that is impressive

You might want to try something a little more realistic when your photoshopping next

haha lol I just noticed that xD I didn't put that there. It came with the blog. I forgot to edit it. Thank you

you presented your tips in a story-telling way which is good for beginners

Yes, I was really hoping to help out the new people with SEO I've gotten good replies about the story and I think people really liked it.

I'll accept that...

One thing I noticed right off in your article is your hinting towards keyword density in Tip #2
http://www.thegermz.com/tutorials/seo/seo-tutorial-part-4

Keyword density is obsolete now... and webmasters who "optimize" for it many times ruin their articles because it disrupts the flow...

You put thought into it from what I did see though and that I congratulate you on. Just keep reading yourself and when you learn new stuff add it, your readers will respect you for it.

Really? I didn't know that I thought it was still used since there are "Results 1 - 10 of about 1,080,000 for keyword density. (0.14 seconds) " in google. Thanks, I will keep on updating it thanks.

great job! This would help all seo newbies to know more about seo.

There are also 2 million results for flat earth but we know the earth is round... if your going to base your beliefs and opinions on the number of Google results it could get mighty interesting.

Hey Hi...

this is with refrence to the thread u posted in.I m new to this concept of SEO and all so, i just wanna know the company who does SEO on a larger scale that is they add the links to multiple number of search engines and so on.....I want to increase a traffic on my few websites...

so can u plz help me out...

With Regards,
Harshal

nice tutorials.. it really learn a some great tips with it.. thanks

There are no private companies that add your site to multiple websites.
Paying for links is not allowed by Google (I'm not 100% sure on this).
Your links are supposed to occur naturally, not by you paying someone. If it is not allowed by Google then your site can get in a lot of trouble and it may even be banned by Google.
If you really want backlinks then publish fresh content that no one else is posting and remember to be original, don't copy someone elses work.
There are many tips on my site about this, I'm sure that if you read them you'll have a better understanding.
The best of luck,
Germz