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    Just wanted feedback on this specific page


    Hi all,

    For a website I'm just finishing an owner/login functionality; it's taken me quite some effort and i really really really would like to sell some subscriptions on this.

    Now although the content looks reasonable to me i'm sure some of you experts have some constructive feedback for me :-)

    Link: https://www.hellolodge.net/en/about/...-holiday-home/

    A bit offtopic; but say i have some budget left for marketing; how would i best promote this feature?

    Any response is appreciated,

    Paul
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    Two things that "jumped" out. Your title element is WAY too long. Second, this is just my preference, I would like to see more room (margin/padding) around your text/content, specifically left/right.
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    Originally Posted by paul9912

    A bit offtopic; but say i have some budget left for marketing; how would i best promote this feature?

    Any response is appreciated,

    Paul
    I would think PPC would be the best in that niche.
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    Thanks Mike,

    I just made those gutters smaller :-) anyway for this page yes i agree some more padding is required.

    Paul
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    Originally Posted by Test-ok
    I would think PPC would be the best in that niche.
    Thanks for that, i've started adwords (ppc) on this page, let's see how that performs...

    I appreciate tips/feedback on experience with other networks to better reach my targeted audience,,,,

    Thanks,
    Paul

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