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    Exclamation Please review my site


    Hi,
    I was wondering if some one out there could review my site for me, and please don't be put off by the "Work from homeness" of the the page.

    I am 18, and currently creating and advertising a webpage in the few months before I go to university to study IT, so I consider this good practice.

    www.workfromhome-uk.com is the first project of mine (well, my family), and I've tried my best to make it clean, honest and genuine, unlike the HUGE amount of spam and rubbish that fills the internet.

    Could someone review my site's homepage, like the general layout, user experience and techinal aspects of the site for me?

    I have, of course, checked out all the sites I can over the internet with keyword density checkers etc and currently got my homepage PageRank to 3, but nothing beats the opinion of a real user.

    Thanks for your time

    Turtoni :-D
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    the site seems fine.
    i am not a big fan of this type of sales approach.
    you are trying to convince me that you are not fat anymore because you started selling stuff from home.
    thats very misleading in my book.
    it may 'glaze over' the eyes of some people...but i does nothing for me.

    this not an attack...its my honest opinion.

    :-D
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    Hi turtoni,

    Your site looks fine.

    Nice photos.
    Last edited by sorvoja; May 3rd, 2004 at 04:40 AM.
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    Yes, I realise the content is a bit contraversial, but I made this site for my family as a way to try and show surfers the business can be genuine, by using real pictures and names. But I guess this is off topic and thanks for your help.

    Could you tell me if there are any specific browser problems or syntax errors for example. I haven't really the time to try compatability with all the different programs out there.

    Thanks
    Turtoni

    P.S. relaxzoolander, thanks for the input, and I guess this is my fault and needs to be expressed more, but the emphasis of the site is basically "This product has helped me lose weight, you can too, or distribue it to earn money" (once again, a sore internet issue)
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    Originally Posted by turtoni
    P.S. relaxzoolander, thanks for the input, and I guess this is my fault and needs to be expressed more, but the emphasis of the site is basically "This product has helped me lose weight, you can too, or distribue it to earn money" (once again, a sore internet issue)
    turt...
    you seem to understand that my comments are not personal.
    that is good.
    but this reaction overshadows any other comments that i may have.
    so i will leave it at that.
    good luck.

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    hi turtoni,

    I am sorry for making negative comments about your sales copy.
    I have removed the comments from the post above.
    I have tested your site with the latest Mozilla build and IE6, at it looks fine visually.
    You might want to run your site trough a html validator, it is not all that important that the html is perfect, but still it could be nice idea.
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    Thanks everyone! I know my site's content is not everyones cup of tea, and I understand that. Thanks for the comments. I'm definitely going to be using these forums more often.

    Cheerz Again
    Turtoni
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    Hi turtoni,

    Welcome aboard. This is a very good forum.

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