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Old December 14th, 2004, 04:22 AM
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Copy writing help

I have a webstore selling furniture but I am having problems writing some sales generating copy.
Can anyone suggest a tool or site that may be of help.
Its temtimg to copy some lines here and there from other sites but this will set off the duplicate site filters.
I am trying to dilute my keyword density as well I am sure I came accross a tool that calculated the density of any text you pasted in can't remember were I saw it.
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Old December 14th, 2004, 09:40 AM
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are you writing copy for items, categories, or general info? i write copy for furniture (don't be stealing mine! ) and when i do an item I tend to try to pick a furniture style (contemporary, mission, asian, etc) a couple adjectives (get a couple furniture catalogs and make a list of adjectives) and some keywords. Just make like 2 sentences using that, and it usually comes out ok.
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Old December 14th, 2004, 10:55 AM
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General sales focused copy for my index page to make the site generate more sales.
I could have a price promise, or price match section.
I am not too good at promoting the plus points of my furniture.

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Your site is looking real good!

Writing copy can take a while (i'm not very good either). I am in the process of writing copy for my furniture sites. What I'm doing is writing several paragraphs, leaving it for a day or two, then go back to it. Change, add, delete etc. Leave it when my brain gets stuck. Then go back to it.

I also look for snippets on other sites that I can incorporate in to my own copy. Take your time and it will all fall into place.

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I agree the site is looking nice and the copy for white glove delivery and the worldpay text sounds good. You're doing well. Don't understimate your skills. Try writing out the price promise or price match section - I bet you'll do fine.
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I have a good copywriter that could help you if you want to spend a little money. He's darn good. He could write a nice KW dense page for the front.

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Merry X-mas to you also. PM me your website so I can look at the copy you have now.

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